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In order to take up a new sport some people think it is better to have access to the latest technology and the most up to date equipment. Other people believe that these things are not necessary for starting a new sport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Sports are the best way to maintain your health and one can learn a new
sport
 irrespective of their age.
However
, some people feel that in order to learn a new
sport
 it is absolutely necessary to buy the high-end
equipment
. There are different views regarding
this
 statement. I partly accept that point as it gives them a reason or a motivation as to why they have to start. Seeing all the new accessories being used, the player gets interested in how to make good use of these things. Let me explain
this
 clearly from an incident I have seen recently. There’s a friend of mine who has a ten-year-old at home,
due to
 the extensive use of mobiles and laptops kids do not go out to play outdoor sports anymore. So, my friend has brought home a pair of tennis rackets and comfortable shoes for his kid. Upon seeing something new, the child definitely wanted to try out the
sport
 and now the kid with a lot of practice is representing his school at competitions. There is another set of people who claim “to start a new
sport
, no new technology or
equipment
 would be required”. I would agree with
this
 statement as well. There are a lot of people who might not have access to
such
 things
due to
 various reasons, the main reason being financial capabilities. Even though they are unable to buy
such
 stuff, their interest to learn the
sport
 drives them. Our best example is the renowned boxer ,Mary Kom. She did not have access to any of the modern and high-end technology or
equipment
, but she made it through just with her handwork and passion. In conclusion, I would say it is just the mindset of a person and their interest in learning a
sport
 that decides the factor whether they should have access to the latest
equipment
, which I feel is not totally necessary.
Submitted by Vaishnavi Dasari on

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