The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012

The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012
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port city in three different kinds of crime from 2003 to 2012. In 2003,
Burglary
started the
number
at 3400 and rose to 3700 in 2004, four years later the
number
extremely decreased to 1200 in 2008 and slightly rose to 1500 in 2009. Between 2009 to 2012, the
number
of
crime
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almost
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stable at 1400. The
number
of
car
theft
in 2003 was 2700 and almost no change till 2005.
Furthermore
, one
year
later the
statistic
fell to 2000 and slowly increased
year
by
year
to the same
number
in 2003 at 2700 cases.
Robbery's
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cases started the
number
at 600 in 2003 and rose to 900 in 2005.
In contrast
, in three years the
statistic
decreased to 500 and rose to 700 in 2010, but in 2011 the
number
fell to 600 and increased to 700 in 2012. In the middle of 2006 and
2007
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the
number
of
burglary
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and
car
theft
was in the same
number
.
Overall
, the
number
of
burglary
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decreased from 2003 to 2012.
Car
theft
shown
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the same
statistic
with
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the
started
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year
and
robbery
experienced increased in 2012. The higher cases
for
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burglary
happened in 2003,
car
theft
in 2004, and
robbery
in 2005. The
statistic
shown
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the lowest
number
on
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of
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incidents
happened
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in 2009 for
burglary
, 2006 for
car
theft
and 2008 for
robbery
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, number, car, theft, year, statistic, robbery with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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