The chart shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012
This
given chart displays crime in new
port city in three different kinds of crime from 2003 to 2012.
In 2003, Add an article
the new
a new
Burglary
started the number
at 3400 and rose to 3700 in 2004, four years later the number
extremely decreased to 1200 in 2008 and slightly rose to 1500 in 2009. Between 2009 to 2012, the number
of crime
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crimes
almost
stable at 1400. The Add a missing verb
was almost
number
of car
theft
in 2003 was 2700 and almost no change till 2005. Furthermore
, one year
later the statistic
fell to 2000 and slowly increased year
by year
to the same number
in 2003 at 2700 cases. Robbery's
cases started the Change noun form
Robbery
number
at 600 in 2003 and rose to 900 in 2005. In contrast
, in three years the statistic
decreased to 500 and rose to 700 in 2010, but in 2011 the number
fell to 600 and increased to 700 in 2012. In the middle of 2006 and 2007
the Add a comma
,2007
number
of burglary
and Change to a plural noun
burglaries
car
theft
was in the same number
.
Overall
, the number
of burglary
decreased from 2003 to 2012. Change to a plural noun
burglaries
Car
theft
shown
the same Wrong verb form
showed
statistic
with
the Change preposition
as
started
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start
year
and robbery
experienced increased in 2012. The higher cases for
Change preposition
of
burglary
happened in 2003, car
theft
in 2004, and robbery
in 2005. The statistic
shown
the lowest Wrong verb form
show
number
on
incidents Change preposition
of
happened
in 2009 for Correct pronoun usage
that happened
burglary
, 2006 for car
theft
and 2008 for robbery
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Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, number, car, theft, year, statistic, robbery with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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