Many believe that the goal of one’s career should be to pursue a passion while others feel it is merely a way to earn a livelihood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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A considerable amount of people believe that people should work based on their passions,

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others believe that they should work for money. Undeniably, almost every capable person on the planet works. It doesn't matter where, how much time, or how much they earn, but they should have a way to get their living basics. Lately, there has been a big dilemma in society that questions if the public is working just for money or if they are doing something they enjoy.

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is the time to talk about what is the correct way to choose a job. It is difficult for me to choose only one side since

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is nonsense. The only way

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may be seen is if you imagine you are an artist and you have your dream occupation, but you earn just enough to buy your food and pay your rent. Are you having a quality life?

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, hypothetically, you are the CEO of a big tech company and receive an unthinkable amount of capital every month, but you arrive every day at your home questioning if all the bill earned is worth wasting all your life on something you hate doing. The previously mentioned examples helped me to explain my point. You should try to search for both. On the whole, to achieve a quality life you should seek a balance between your passions, and strengths and look for what society

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willing to pay you to do. If you follow all the past you may solve some of your economic and emotional issues.

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task response

Address both sides of the argument and clearly state your opinion at the end of the essay.

coherence cohesion

The essay has a clear structure with an introduction and conclusion. However, the logical flow of ideas can be improved for better coherence and cohesion.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

263 words

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Many believe that the goal of one’s career should be to pursue a passion while others feel it is merely a way to earn a livelihood. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Newspaper have influenced people's ideas and opinions. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative situation?

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