The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port City Center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port City Center from 2003 to 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The given line chart depicts the alteration of criminalisation that happened in the New Port City Centre which picked from three different types of crime
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Burglary,
Car
theft, and Robbery between 2003 and 2012
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year, Burglary was the highest rate of crime in the cities which almost reached 4000 incidents, followed by
Car
theft with almost 3000 cases,
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, Robbery was the lowest number of crime incidents with 500 rates. Looking at the line in detail, Burglary reached its highest peak in 2004, and it started
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sharply to 1300 incidents in 2008, and remain stable until 2012.
Car
theft, from 2003 to 2005, was slightly same rates, and it was down in the next year. The number of
Car
chefs rose again from 2009 to 2012. Meanwhile, Robbery has fluctuated throughout the year with the rate of cases between 1000 for the pinnacle and 500 for the bottom
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