In today's 
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 have a lot of 
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 , and they are working with many 
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  . It is sometimes believed that to keep your 
 and office clean you should 
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  and put everything in the right location. In my opinion, I agree that 
 can find their valuable items if they have put them in the correct 
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To commence with, there are a number of benefits to folks if they are organised 
. 
, if 
 find their daily routine 
 without getting a delay, they can feel comfortable and 
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, they can 
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, a test engineer can only 
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, it is important for 
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  correct 
. To illustrate 
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  to all new employees 
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  both of them. They can 
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, it is 
 good for 
 if they follow the same rule of organizing 
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  . They make lunch for all family members within a time if all 
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  kitchen are put in the correct 
. 
, 
 rule is 
 useful for children. They like to 
 in their study room if all books are organised well and the room is tidy. 
, if 
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  to produce some bacteria or insects in their 
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, one of the family 
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 . So, it is good that 
 clean their 
 and their floors daily to minimize 
 issue.
In conclusion, nowadays, 
 are becoming so busy in their life, and they are forgetting to keep their surrounding area clean. Some 
 argue that to keep 
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  clean, they should 
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  all 
 in the right 
, and in my opinion, I believe that it is correct to follow 
 rule at both 
 and office. By doing 
, 
 can feel 
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  and more energetic to 
.