Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised in the correct place. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's

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world,

people

have a lot of

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, and they are working with many

things

like

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or

workplace related

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things

. It is sometimes believed that to keep your

home

and office clean you should

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and put everything in the right location. In my opinion, I agree that

people

can find their valuable items if they have put them in the correct

place

. To commence with, there are a number of benefits to folks if they are organised

people

.

Firstly

, if

people

find their daily routine

things

without getting a delay, they can feel comfortable and

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.

Consequently

, they can

work

with confidence and

reliably

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.

For instance

, a test engineer can only

work

without

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delay when they find all testing equipment

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one

place

.

Secondly

, it is important for

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to learn

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in

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order and it put

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a

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correct

place

. To illustrate

this

, if employers put everything in

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common digital platform like Google Drive, and give access

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to all new employees

then

it is

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both of them. They can

work

parallel

on

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that time.

Moreover

, it is

also

good for

people

if they follow the same rule of organizing

things

at

home

. It is beneficial to all working women, as they have no time before going

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work

. They make lunch for all family members within a time if all

things

in

a

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kitchen are put in the correct

place

.

Moreover

,

this

rule is

also

useful for children. They like to

work

in their study room if all books are organised well and the room is tidy.

In contrast

, if

people

cannot clean their

home

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, it may be

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to produce some bacteria or insects in their

home

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homes

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.

As a result

, one of the family

member

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will face health

issue

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. So, it is good that

people

clean their

home

and their floors daily to minimize

this

issue. In conclusion, nowadays,

people

are becoming so busy in their life, and they are forgetting to keep their surrounding area clean. Some

people

argue that to keep

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clean, they should

organised

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all

things

in the right

place

, and in my opinion, I believe that it is correct to follow

this

rule at both

home

and office. By doing

this

,

people

can feel

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and more energetic to

work

.