Students at schools and universities can learn more from lessons with their teachers than from other sources, such as the Internet and television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education plays

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very important role in

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life. Some people believe the in-person study with teachers at learning institutes is more beneficial compared to the knowledge pupils gain by using

internet

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the internet

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and television. I completely agree with

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idea and in

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essay

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with, electric gadgets are full

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distractions. There

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number of applications

such

as

instagram

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, TikTok and many more

which

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usually disturb the focus of

learner

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learners

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while

studying on

internet

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.

For example

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one study,

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students do not take online

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classes

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as they do in-person classes. So, screens

attracts

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pupils towards other things on

internet

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instead

of devoting their time to

study

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. Another reason why I agree with physical classes is that It makes a good relationship of

learners

with each other and with their teachers which is very essential.

Student

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learn good moral values

such

as respect, support each other and so on.

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educator

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an educator

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makes a pupil feel confident to ask whatever question in his mind. On

other

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hand, despite the fact that the

internet

distract

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learners

, It

also

makes knowledge more accessible to them. What I mean by saying

this

is that

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instructor is not available to

learners

all the time and they can search

whatever

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they want to learn on

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the internet

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internet

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Internet

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.

For example

- there are enormous channels on youtube which

teachs

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teach

very good English.

Hence

, Smartphones are always ready to answer any question at any time in

this

technological era. In conclusion,

although

online education is easily available

but

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the lessons with mentors are more beneficial because of

less

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distractions and more personal touch. I believe the traditional way of conveying education to

learners

is

a

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best way.