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Some people think it is better to live in the city while others say the countryside is better. Discuss both attributes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Gathering something in one place brings a wide range of advantages
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 as a vast array of recreational facilities, having meals from wide options, and access to any place without driving. Personally, I think to live in an urban
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 provides many profits than to live in a rural
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. One typical benefit to live in a downtown is its developed transport system, which allows us to access anywhere with relatively affordable costs. If
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, we have to drive our own cars to commute, or even to go any place, and
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 inefficient transfer method exholes a massive vehicle emmisions.
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, it could be one of the most huge contribution to the environment pollution. There are another aspect of making a life in the city. Learning a multitude of information generally requires in today's society to foster the ability of creativity. When we live in city, it is quite easy to visit to museums, zoos, and other recreational places to study history, science, and arts.
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, some people augue that to live in a rural
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 provides some benefits; low density: which allows to posses a house, clean air: which is suitable to gazing the stars, and relatively carefree education: which is relatively carefree to grow children
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 the opposite situation sometimes intrude a serious burden on them. In the conclusion,
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 there is some plus points to live in the urban
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, having a life in the city brings much more benefits in view of transportation, efficient daily routine, and access to any destination easily.
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