The given maps above indicate the changes of a small town from 1950 - 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps illustrate the most significant changes which took place in a small town over the period from 1950 to 2000. All in all, it could be noticed that the city has become more residential, in 2000 there were a lot of changes,
for instance
, the opening of the airport southeast of the river. It Linking Words
also
can be mentioned that the bridge had been built.
The first change that can be noticed is that two-storeyed houses have been replaced by skyscrapers since 1950. Linking Words
Moreover
, in 1950 there weren't any parking places, Linking Words
whereas
in 2000 there were two parking stations. Another striking change is Linking Words
a
wide range of entertainment in 2000. Clubs, bars, a fitness centre and a shopping centre have been constructed over 50 years. Correct article usage
the
Furthermore
, a new cinema was opened.
It is not only buildings that have been completely changed. The selection of transport has Linking Words
also
undergone noticeable transformations. It could be highlighted that the airport and the train station have been engineered.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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