Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a health and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

consuming
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nutrient
nutrients
and fibres will help to shape
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body and your life,
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exercise
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it will be longer and
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way but mix combination of both of them is my ideal lifespan
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so I completely disagree with that because I have reasons.
firstly
, setting up everyday
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exercise
and healthy food in
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plan is
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and most people
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don't
have
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,
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, collecting fresh
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ingredients
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3 times
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a day and
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of your life, cost
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and leg .
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, not enough
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motivation
would be a barrier between you and your goal it can
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lack of
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partener
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partner
and
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loneliness
or mind
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, etc. Each time you open your
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you are observing models , actors and
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that want to
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illustrate
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the sollution
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sollution
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of having
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healthy way that will
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mind too.
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conclution
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conclusion
,if you are seeking
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enhancement
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long life
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expectancy
you have to dedicate your
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for
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