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Education is not luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

#education #luxury #right #wealth
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recent times, skills and knowledge can’t be ignored if you want to live a good life for now every job does require a particular skill or knowledge
therefore
, folks are now more aware of the significance of schooling.
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 means that demands for free education as a primary human right have increased significantly.
Firstly
 ,
this
 means that all children can
study
 freely and without any
descrimination
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discrimination
likewise
 the elite people in the same school, atmosphere and
equipments
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,
thus
 no one’s talent will be wasted.
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 students with lower financial
situation
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 will be more motivated to
study
 as
result
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 of
opportunity
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 that has been given to them to
study
 in a well condition like their peers in higher social class. Another
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 is
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 and cultural growth that it contributes to. Countries with
higher
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 number of educated people normally have stronger culture and society, since most of the citizens are educated,
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 the differences between developing countries and developed countries, the reason that
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 group is in a better position in various fields
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 cultural and social fields are that there are more educated
citizents
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citizens
. It’s sensible
to conclude
 that schooling should be
tution-free
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tuition-free
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people deserve to
study
 in a
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 situation without any difficulties
although
 it may seem very idealistic but at least we should try our best to get as near as possible to it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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