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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars, and other items. Many have encouraged this behavior, but others believe it has caused modern society to be worse off. Discuss both views and provide your opinion.

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There is a contentious issue of whether the purchasing of privileged brand
products
 is acceptable for contemporary
society
 or not.
While
 some argue that it is reasonable as it allows customers to get convenient repair
service
, the
other
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 assume that the buying probably exerts negative effects. I for one lean toward the view that consumers should consider
products
 from small businesses because it can avoid uniformity and support minor companies.
To begin
 with, the increasing tendency for purchases
of
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well-known
brands
 could be beneficial because of their prompt repair
service
. if one would purchase a stuff from famous
brands
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brand
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, they might provide great
service
 about fixing when some parts of it are broken.
Consequently
, the customer could be satisfied with the
service
, which makes the next purchase.
For instance
, my brother bought a new mobile
phone
 from Samsung two years ago. Even though the screen of his
phone
 was cracked because of his fault,
Samsung
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service
center
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 fixed his
phone
 without any charge. After that, he recently decided to change his
phone
 to another one from Samsung.
In contrast
, buying famous
brands
 is probably harmful for
society
 on the grounds that it would remove
uniqueness
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 of
society
 and cause small companies to be vulnerable. When it comes to
lack
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 of uniqueness, a variety of
products
 is necessary since consumers should have multiple choices
due to
 their different preferences and circumstances.
However
, if most
of
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people would buy
products
 from a small number of big
brands
, other companies might run out of business.
This
 situation
worsen
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 markets and only
few
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 corporations eventually survive and sell their
products
 only. People’s preferences could be ignored by them, resulting in
the
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 situation where everyone uses the same
stuffs
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stuff
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. After all,
whereas
 many people support the idea that the ascending trend of buying more well-known
brands
, the topic is still controversial. I personally believe that the opinion is
a
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more persuasive that less purchasing of big company
products
 can protect
society
 from negative aspects.
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