the diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

the diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
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The supplied diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing carbonated beverages.
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, it can be that the process consists of 5 stars before the drink is finished and albeit the making is totally mechanised it is still complex. Getting back to details, the first stage is for raw
water
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to be cleaned by a special filter and
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move forward to another machine in order to become softer and
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some important chemicals to be added to it. After that
water
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passes through a pump which directly lead to electric heaters where the next stage happened. The
water
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is heated before it goes into the cooling pipe which throws out the
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in a special container where bubbles appear in it
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carbon dioxide.
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the carbonated
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is transferred to the mixing tank. When the
water
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is in the tank colour, flavour and syrup are added to it before being filtered and
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allocated in bottles. Once the
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is battled it is ready to be delivered to the supermarket which is the final step.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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