the diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.
The supplied diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing carbonated beverages.
Overall
, it can be that the process consists of 5 stars before the drink is finished and albeit the making is totally mechanised it is still complex.
Getting back to details, the first stage is for raw Linking Words
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to be cleaned by a special filter and Use synonyms
then
move forward to another machine in order to become softer and Linking Words
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some important chemicals to be added to it. After that Linking Words
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passes through a pump which directly lead to electric heaters where the next stage happened. The Use synonyms
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is heated before it goes into the cooling pipe which throws out the Use synonyms
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carbon dioxide. Linking Words
Then
the carbonated Linking Words
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is transferred to the mixing tank.
When the Use synonyms
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is in the tank colour, flavour and syrup are added to it before being filtered and Use synonyms
then
allocated in bottles. Once the Linking Words
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is battled it is ready to be delivered to the supermarket which is the final step.Use synonyms
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