Space exploration costs tax payers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

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as the moon and Mars

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one of the

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projects that

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public funds.

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,

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is causing the

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citizens to pay huge

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of

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every year.

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trend. To start with,one of the downsides of space exploration is that it put much

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on the

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to pay large amounts of

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people

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in the society

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not have the same financial capacity and their taxes should be limited to what they can afford yearly.If there is an increase in the contributions they make to the purse of

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government because of space

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research

,they may become unable to take responsibility for their immediate needs.

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may result

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more poverty in the community.

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, when a family of six who struggle to put food on their table is exposed to high

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,they can eventually

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financially.

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,the citizens will not appreciate the

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of space exploration because of the huge contributions they make.

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may eventually cause tension in the nation as

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may no longer have

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in paying their taxes anymore. Despite the downsides of the cost of exorbitant

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paid by the

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each year,there are benefits to be considered.

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, carrying out a project on other planets brightens the knowledge of the researchers.

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helps

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scientists to give accurate information about other parts of the world.

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increase the knowledge of young

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adults in

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society.

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,when

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people

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contribute to

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investigations with great

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, they tend to do more because they can see the value for their

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. In conclusion, despite the negatives sides of

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paying large amounts of

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towards scientists investigations into other parts of the world.There are benefits to be considered.