The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Bar charts illustrate the destinations of UK graduate and postgraduate students after passing out of college in 2008.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
graduates
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who left the university was higher than that of the postgraduates. First and foremost, the highest
number
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of
graduates
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and postgraduates 29,665 and 2,725 respectively were involved in
further
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studies after leaving college
whereas
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, the least were in voluntary work.
Furthermore
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, the
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of unemployed and part-time
graduates
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was almost similar among
graduates
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while
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the
number
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of people who had part-time jobs was almost double compared to the unemployment rate among postgraduate students.
To conclude
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, both graphs provide information on how UK
graduates
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and postgraduates behaved after passing out from college in 1948. Both were interested in studying
afew
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a few
more years
further
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while
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the least interested area was involved in voluntary work.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, graduates with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution of activities
  • full-time employment
  • similar trends
  • significant proportion
  • further study
  • part-time work
  • unemployment
  • economic challenges
  • secure jobs
  • post-college activity
  • practical experience
  • additional education
  • volunteer work
  • personal development
  • skill enhancement
  • comparatively
  • niche skillsets
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