The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Bar charts illustrate the destinations of UK graduate and postgraduate students after passing out of college in 2008.
Overall
, the number
of graduates
who left the university was higher than that of the postgraduates.
First and foremost, the highest number
of graduates
and postgraduates 29,665 and 2,725 respectively were involved in further
studies after leaving college whereas
, the least were in voluntary work. Furthermore
, the number
of unemployed and part-time graduates
was almost similar among graduates
while
the number
of people who had part-time jobs was almost double compared to the unemployment rate among postgraduate students.
To conclude
, both graphs provide information on how UK graduates
and postgraduates behaved after passing out from college in 1948. Both were interested in studying afew
more years Correct your spelling
a few
further
while
the least interested area was involved in voluntary work.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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