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Discuss the pros and cons of using animals for scientific research?

Animals
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 are used for medicines and for different experiments to test various types of drugs before
use
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 on human beings. Using
animals
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 for scientific
research
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 is very beneficial but it is
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 a very cruel and unethical procedure. In my opinion, using
animals
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 for scientific
research
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 is not good and we should focus on some alternatives that can serve the purpose. On one hand, animal testing is the main source for the safety of
humans
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. Many lifesaving drugs were invented by using
animals
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. Scientists are using different types of
animals
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 for the welfare of
humans
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.
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, they
use
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 mice to test a drug and they
use
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this
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 result for the betterment of people.
Secondly
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, many
animals
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 share similar anatomy to
humans
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. That's why it will yield maximum closed results. For instance, mice share 99 per cent similar anatomy to
humans
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.
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, there are many disadvantages,too. The main issue is that it is highly illegal, morally wrong and unethical. Hurting
animals
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 for the sake of human well-being is totally wrong. Experimentation causes severe reactions in
animals
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 which cause illness in
animals
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 and sometimes they died.
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 scientific
research
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animals
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 suffer a lot of pain.
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, if experiments do not come true, it causes the death of innocent
animals
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.
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, it
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 affects the ecosystem and natural habitat of the
animals
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. It leads to multiple psychological disorders in the
animals
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. In conclusion, it looks wrong to
use
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animals
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 for scientific
research
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 just to serve
humans
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 because it causes unbearable pain in
animals
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. If it is necessary to test the newly developed drugs
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 we should focus on the alternatives
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 as IVF and humanoid robots.

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