The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
The pie charts depict the proportional representation of how hazardous
waste
products have been disposed of in three different countries
.
The most significant feature is that United Kindom buries approximately 82% of its hazardous waste
products underground, which is the greatest proportion of all categories among the three countries
. In addition
, United Kindom has two alternative methods different from other countries
dealing with pollution, which are chemical treatment and dumping at sea accounting for 8% and 8% respectively.
Another noticeable trend among the three pie charts is the recycling percentages in the Republic of Korea and Sweden, people assume European countries
may put more emphasis on recycling waste
. In stark contrast, however
, recycling constitutes roughly 69% of the Republic of Korea. On the other hand
, Sweden only makes up 25% of recycling and over half of the proportion of dealing dangerous waste
is buried underground.
In conclusion, using the underground method is the most prevalent way to deal with pollution, while
recycling and incineration are the following methods being used to dispose of the products.Submitted by aslenxd on
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