The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The given pie chart depicts the major
causes
of worldwide Use synonyms
land
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degradation
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while
the table illustrates the percentage of Linking Words
land
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degradation
in Use synonyms
three
areas namely North America, Europe, and Oceania was affected by the Use synonyms
reasons
during the 1990s.
In general, the main Use synonyms
causes
of Use synonyms
land
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degradation
were dominated by over-grazing, over-cultivation, and deforestation. Use synonyms
Also
, those Linking Words
three
Use synonyms
reasons
affected mostly in the Use synonyms
three
countries.
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According to
the data, the biggest Linking Words
degradation
of Use synonyms
land
was made by over-grazing (35%). Use synonyms
Similarly
, both over-cultivation and deforestation donated almost the same percentage of 28% and 30% respectively. Meanwhile, the least Linking Words
causes
of Use synonyms
degradation
in the farming field were by other Use synonyms
reasons
, just 7%.
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Furthermore
, those Linking Words
causes
affected the Use synonyms
three
countries. Europe was the country having the biggest impact of the Use synonyms
reasons
, which was 23%. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, North America had just 5% in total Linking Words
land
Use synonyms
degradation
and was less than Oceania with just 13%.Use synonyms
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