The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The given pie chart depicts the major
causes
of worldwide
land
degradation
while
the table illustrates the percentage of
land
degradation
in
three
areas namely North America, Europe, and Oceania was affected by the
reasons
during the 1990s. In general, the main
causes
of
land
degradation
were dominated by over-grazing, over-cultivation, and deforestation.
Also
, those
three
reasons
affected mostly in the
three
countries.
According to
the data, the biggest
degradation
of
land
was made by over-grazing (35%).
Similarly
, both over-cultivation and deforestation donated almost the same percentage of 28% and 30% respectively. Meanwhile, the least
causes
of
degradation
in the farming field were by other
reasons
, just 7%.
Furthermore
, those
causes
affected the
three
countries. Europe was the country having the biggest impact of the
reasons
, which was 23%.
On the other hand
, North America had just 5% in total
land
degradation
and was less than Oceania with just 13%.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words causes, land, degradation, three, reasons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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