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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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skills
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 play an important role in everyone's carrier. Experts believe that reading
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 will develop ones thinking and language ability
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 those
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television
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. To start with, reading newspapers and
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easier way to get information. Experts suggest
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read more whenever they get a chance to develop their oral and written
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 for their personality grooming.
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 we will learn more and develop our vocabulary in different domains.
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 watching
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 is the easiest way to improve
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communication
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 skill as we listen
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oral
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watching
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not
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 capability. In conclusion,
people
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 watching
television
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 will somewhat improve their
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skills
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 but they are going to lack
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imagination
skills
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. In my opinion, reading
books
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 will definitely improve both
communication
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 and
innovation
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skills
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This
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books
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 is entirely necessary to improve
people
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skills
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