Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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have
established a Unnecessary verb
apply
school
in the past, it has been Use synonyms
considerd
as Correct your spelling
considered
a
essential institution for studying among all students around the world. Change the article
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In addition
to that, new methods for education have shown up Linking Words
nowdays
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nowadays
such
as online courses because of COVID-19 and it makes people Linking Words
to
learn something anywhere out of the Change the verb form
apply
school
. Use synonyms
However
, I am of the opinion that studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. The reason why is that making a social Linking Words
relationship
and learning rules or regulations from teachers are significantly important .
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relationships
Firstly
, pupils who are time to go to Linking Words
school
need to Use synonyms
aware
that we can not afford to live without a social relationship. Add a missing verb
be aware
For example
, a Linking Words
success
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successful
business man
always has a Correct your spelling
businessman
strength
connection with most Replace the word
strong
of
people when they do business with other partners. If there is no chance to be taught how to make and sustain the relationship in Change preposition
apply
the
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apply
school
, Use synonyms
young
generation could not form it Correct article usage
the young
as well as
it leads them to fail Linking Words
their
dream in the future. Change preposition
in their
Hence
, they must be involved in a classroom during their period of learning.
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Secondly
, young children should be given the lesson regard of rules and regulations Linking Words
from
their tutors. Change preposition
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For instance
, if they attend a class through a video call they can not feel obeying the order from teachers because nobody will not know they are breaking the rule or not under the camera. The only way to learn conditions is Linking Words
attending
the class and Change preposition
by attending
follow
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following
act
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actions
from
somebody so that pupils can recognize what rules and regulations are in the real situation.
In conclusion, Change preposition
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absence
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the absence
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lecture in the real world is quite critical for the young generation who has to absorb many things they can learn from Change preposition
in a
a
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compare
to staying at home. Wrong verb form
compared
Therefore
, I think not only children must get involved in their lectures unless they have a tough situation to attend Linking Words
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school
but Use synonyms
also
the government should encourage parents to send their kids to Linking Words
real
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the real
a real
institution
rather than Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
stucking
at home.Correct your spelling
sticking
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