Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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people

have

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established a

school

in the past, it has been

considerd

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considered

as

a

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essential institution for studying among all students around the world.

In addition

to that, new methods for education have shown up

nowdays

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nowadays

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such

as online courses because of COVID-19 and it makes people

to

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learn something anywhere out of the

school

.

However

, I am of the opinion that studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. The reason why is that making a social

relationship

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relationships

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and learning rules or regulations from teachers are significantly important .

Firstly

, pupils who are time to go to

school

need to

aware

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that we can not afford to live without a social relationship.

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, a

success

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business man

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businessman

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always has a

strength

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connection with most

of

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apply

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people when they do business with other partners. If there is no chance to be taught how to make and sustain the relationship in

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school

,

young

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generation could not form it

as well as

it leads them to fail

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dream in the future.

Hence

, they must be involved in a classroom during their period of learning.

Secondly

, young children should be given the lesson regard of rules and regulations

from

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their tutors.

For instance

, if they attend a class through a video call they can not feel obeying the order from teachers because nobody will not know they are breaking the rule or not under the camera. The only way to learn conditions is

attending

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by attending

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the class and

follow

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the

act

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actions

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from

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somebody so that pupils can recognize what rules and regulations are in the real situation. In conclusion,

absence

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of participating

a

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in a

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lecture in the real world is quite critical for the young generation who has to absorb many things they can learn from

a

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apply

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school

compare

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compared

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to staying at home.

Therefore

, I think not only children must get involved in their lectures unless they have a tough situation to attend

a

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school

but

also

the government should encourage parents to send their kids to

real

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the real

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institution

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institutions

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rather than

stucking

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sticking

at home.