Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter, suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I hope you are in good health! I am writing

this

letter with reference to the advertisement you posted on the internet for the requirement of house help in your home for the next summer to come. I used to be a professional chef in a five-star hotel

while

I was in India. I am an independent person and I tend to handle all day-to-day operational activities by myself. On the whole, I would be able to help you out with Cooking, Cleaning, and washing clothes. I would be taking a break from my regular job up until the next winter.

Moreover

, for five years have been living in Canada without any company, so

this

role would offer me a home environment to forget my loneliness. I will be present throughout the summers. On weekdays I am present between 12 Pm to 5 Pm.

However

, on weekends I would be not available because I choose to travel to my friend's place on those two remaining days of the week. I am hoping to hear from you soon! Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla

Submitted by madhur.bathla on Thu May 04 2023

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8 paragraphs

184 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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