You have just read in an article in a national newspaper which claim that town centers in your country all over look very similar to each other.ypu don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper.in your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir, I write to express my appreciation for the beautiful review you gave in your newspaper about the town centres in my country, Honestly, your detailed explanation about the structure of the building and how they are usually situated at the centre of the market was so on point.

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, there are some details that I don't quite agree with especially the paragraph that says that all of them are similar to each other.

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there are quite a number of differences,

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, I came from the Igbo tribe in Nigeria and we have a unique culture which reflects how we do things. Our building is usually surrounded by knitted palm fronds,

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, There is a calabash at the centre where things like alligator pepper, kola nuts etc are kept. I will appreciate it if you will inform me of the next time you will be visiting our country so I can give you a guided tour of my beautiful city. There are many discoveries you are yet to make. Your's faithfully Chidinma Elisha

chidinmaelisha24Thu May 04 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

176 words

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