The map below shows the development of village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present
The drawing highlights the changes
have
taken place at Rye mouth village between 1995 and Correct pronoun usage
that have
present
Correct article usage
the present
years
.
Fix the agreement mistake
year
Overall
, it is clearly noticeable that more facilities are installed including tennis
court, golf section, car parking, apartment and many more.
Starting with the housing section, in the year 1995 there were 12 houses which Correct article usage
a tennis
palce
is now upgraded with 4 more houses. On the east Correct your spelling
place
side
of the map, there was farmland and forest part in 1995, which is now removed and converted into golf
and tennis court. Following the housing road on the west Correct article usage
a golf
side
, earlier there was
5 shops which are too converted into restaurants. On the opposite Change the verb form
were
side
of the shop, there was hotel
in 1995, which still remains as it Add an article
a hotel
the hotel
is accompany
Change the verb form
is accompanied
with
Change preposition
by
car
park. Crossing the road on South West Correct article usage
a car
side
, the fish market is removed and apartments are construct
Change the verb form
are constructed
instead
of it. Cafe
on South East Correct article usage
The cafe
side
of map
still remains Add an article
the map
unchange
. Correct your spelling
unchanged
Lastly
fishing Port is also
removed.Submitted by samruddhinibandhe0 on
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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