The line graph shows the number of people moving from rural to urban areas from 2000 to 2025.

The line graph shows the number of people moving from rural to urban areas from 2000 to 2025.
The line graph provides a comparison of 3 different nationalities of
people
in terms of their migration from the countryside proportion over a period of half a decade from 2000 to 2025.
Overall
, the main feature of the data is that all the 3 countries' immigrants were going in the same direction.
However
, Iran had the primary form and Indonesia showed a negligible number of
people
moving to the town.
According to
what is shown, it is clearly evident that the number of
people
moving from all the 3 countries started at roughly the same percentage which is almost 10 million in 2000.
Thereafter
, Iranian citizens began to move to the city in the 2000s. As there was a slight increase until 2005 when the ratio saw a significant climb
as well as
a dramatic soar in Russian and Indonesian
people
proportion over that period.
Consequently
, all the 3 nationalities continued their usual behaviour until 2020 when Iran overtook Russia providing the highest percentage of
people
moving and amounting to just below 100 million.
While
Indonesia had a wide static at about 30 million as it remained the same from 2020 to 2025.
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