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One of the widely discussed issue nowadays is the possibility of the choice. Now people are beginning to realize that how important is the independent formulation of their standarts. Personally, I tend to think that freedom of speech is vital in our society.

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One of the widely discussed
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 nowadays is the possibility of
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choice. Now people are beginning to realize
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how important is the independent formulation of their
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standards
. Personally, I tend to think that
freedom
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 of speech is vital in our society.
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, it is well known that the ability to defend your opinion is a good skill.What I mean here is that
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 can have an impact on important events. One of the main reasons behind
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a development
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 of their own beliefs for each person. A good case in point is school elections where every
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 have
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 to
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vote
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 for their candidate.
On the other hand
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, it can
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 be argued that
freedom
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 of speech can affect the economy in countries.
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 to say about South Korea. Take
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their
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 where
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 of the most developed
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 in the world people live and they have the right to choose. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that
freedom
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 of voice is
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 great importance in our society,
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and thanks
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 to it our environment can become better.
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 right includes the ideas of
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 of public opinion and the
freedom
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 and expression of public opinion, both without any interference from state powers and regardless of state frontiers.
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, without it, we literally cannot exist,
freedom
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 is the ability to understand and accept the realities of life, without which it is impossible to make a meaningful, free choice.

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Your opinion

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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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