You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour Introduce your self Describe your plans for the party Invitee your neighbour to come

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Dear neighbour, Hi, my name is Jimena your new neighbour. My family and I just moved to the house next door to yours. As we just moved we are planning to make a housewarming party

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weekend. I wanted to notify you in advance

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the noises we may make, we don’t want to cause you any inconvenience.

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, Some relatives and friends are coming around 5 pm

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Saturday and I would feel so grateful if you could come. The idea is to have a barbecue in the backyard, have some drinks and spend a chill night chatting and listening to some music. My sister is bringing a passion fruit and chocolate cake for dessert, she is an amazing baker

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I am planning to cook some traditional food from my country Let me know if you manage to come, I am looking forward to meeting each other, Yours faithfully, Jimena

jimeilariaThu May 04 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

153 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour Introduce your self Describe your plans for the party Invitee your neighbour to come

Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young university students, others think sending young people to universities only lead to graduate unemployment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Disruptive school children have negative influence on others. students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view

"Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities, such as helping at home or work. Others argue that children should be free to enjoy their lives outside of school.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did the training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.