You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour Introduce your self Describe your plans for the party Invitee your neighbour to come

Dear neighbour, Hi, my name is Jimena your new neighbour. My family and I just moved to the house next door to yours. As we just moved we are planning to make a housewarming party

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weekend. I wanted to notify you in advance

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the noises we may make, we don’t want to cause you any inconvenience.

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, Some relatives and friends are coming around 5 pm

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Saturday and I would feel so grateful if you could come. The idea is to have a barbecue in the backyard, have some drinks and spend a chill night chatting and listening to some music. My sister is bringing a passion fruit and chocolate cake for dessert, she is an amazing baker

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I am planning to cook some traditional food from my country Let me know if you manage to come, I am looking forward to meeting each other, Yours faithfully, Jimena

jimeilaria

May 4, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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153 words

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