You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour Introduce your self Describe your plans for the party Invitee your neighbour to come

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Dear neighbour, Hi, my name is Jimena your new neighbour. My family and I just moved to the house next door to yours. As we just moved we are planning to make a housewarming party

this

weekend. I wanted to notify you in advance

due to

the noises we may make, we don’t want to cause you any inconvenience.

furthermore

, Some relatives and friends are coming around 5 pm

this

Saturday and I would feel so grateful if you could come. The idea is to have a barbecue in the backyard, have some drinks and spend a chill night chatting and listening to some music. My sister is bringing a passion fruit and chocolate cake for dessert, she is an amazing baker

also

I am planning to cook some traditional food from my country Let me know if you manage to come, I am looking forward to meeting each other, Yours faithfully, Jimena

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