One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that governments of wealthy countries should take more obligation for assisting impoverished countries in such areas. Now people are beginning to realize that development depends on the joint efforts of a large number of different groups.
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that governments of wealthy
countries
should take more obligation for assisting impoverished countries
in such
areas. Now people are beginning to realize that development depends on the joint efforts of a large number of different groups. Personally, I tend to think that everyone should assist to
each other in difficult times.
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Firstly
, it is well known that a large number of rich lands have an opportunity to help. What I mean here is that they are able to create distinct events in support of poor society. One of the main reasons behind that is
they have a wide range of facilities due to
this
they may pool their resources and improve lives in impoverished countries
. A good case in point is providing jobs for qualified people from economically backward nations, so both sides can obtain mutual benefit
and strengthened their relations.
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benefits
On the other hand
, it can also
be argued that only rich countries
must be responsible. That is
to say
poor nations should aim to become self-sufficient and do not attempt to rely on someone. Take Add a comma
,say
for
example, the situation with the Add the comma(s)
,for
COVID 19
pandemic, when the entire world was going through financial turmoil and needed assistance. Add a hyphen
COVID-19
Therefore
, poor countries
suffer enormously due to
the lack of a competent economy and proper conditions for life so what they should do is consider every single detail in the development of the country to escape such
terrible circumstances.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that the optimum solution is to provide market access so the region can produce products and obtain regular income.Submitted by dnm.best on
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