Write a letter to your local council about the state of the sport club facilities and request more facilities suitable for people of your age. - Describe your sport club facilities. - What facilities are required? - Explain why people of your age need these facilities.
Dear Mr. Jhon,
I am writing to request get more additional exercise pieces of equipment and facilities added to the
sport
club.
Currently, machines that people use to exercise are not Change the noun form
sports
upto
the standard, because they are really old and worn off. Correct your spelling
up to
Due to
that individuals might hurt themselves using them. Additionally
, the swimming pool has very filthy water.
Also
, we are in need of a new basketball court and a new yoga area. Young individuals like to stay fit and they are into new types of things, therefore
if we want to get more youth to be a part of the sports club now is the time to make some changes and challenge the old ways. Since a lot of people are interested in playing bowling we can construct a bowling alley as well if the budget does not limit us.
Youth nowadays does not only wants to rely on exercise machines and traditional swimming,
they expect a change from their own town sports council Add the word(s)
but,
also
if we can not fulfil their demands they will turn to other alternative options that are leaving the town to find better standards of life. In order to prevent that and keep the youth inside the town it is high time to take drastic measures.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Devin VindulaSubmitted by devinvindula7 on
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