The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts how many numbers of the three different crimes that happened in New Port city centre during the period between 2003 to 2012.
The burglary
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had the most significant changes from 2003 to 2012, which peaked at roughly 4300 in 2004; suddenly, the number of incidents plunged sharply to approximately 1500 in 2007 outstripped by
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theft
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in the same year. After 2007, the number of crimes of burglary stabilized in the range of 1000 to 1500
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the rest of the time. Another noticeable trend is that
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theft
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and robbery remained constant during the period between 2003 to 2012.
Car
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theft
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only fluctuated in the range of around 2100 to 2800, and the Robbery was even more stable which only change to around 100 every year. In conclusion, the incidents were actually reaching a balance after 2007. During the period of 2008 to 2012, three crimes didn't fluctuate a lot,
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theft
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still had the greatest incidents number of 2400 in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, theft with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • instances of crime
  • significant decline
  • noticeable change
  • fluctuating trend
  • relatively stable
  • minor fluctuations
  • dramatic reduction
  • converged towards
  • crime rate
  • time frame
  • notable trajectory
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