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Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of news and information, causing newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, many
people
 have argued that the public will encounter
news
 and
information
 only through the
Internet
 not from newspapers and magazines which will be no longer used. I
also
 agree with that and in
this
 essay, I will elaborate on the specific culprits.
To begin
 with, cutting-edge technology allows
people
 to use the
internet
 more frequently.
That is
 to say, because of high-tech devices,
people
 could use the
internet
 to find
information
 and
news
 not from printing media. New York Times, one of the major newspaper companies in the USA,
for instance
, invests three times more in online media than newspapers to adapt to the modern phenomenon.
Moreover
, numerous pieces of
information
 can be seen on the
internet
.
In other words
,
people
 are only able to meet limited info via magazines or newspapers.
This
 is exemplified by China where printed media is still predominant and the Chinese have difficulty from insufficient
information
 which blinds their eyes. The opponents might consider how much the
information
 on the
internet
 is trustworthy. It can be true somewhat degree. Because it is
also
 one of well- known facts in our society unfiltered and fake
news
 navigate on the
internet
 and often make the public feel confused.
However
, it is
also
 can be seen that governments from different nations make significant efforts to censor a lot of pieces of
information
 on the
internet
 and correct them immediately. The US government announced in 2020 with respect to fake
news
 and
information
 and implement related policies which make alert the US citizen. In conclusion, I believe that because of cutting-edge technology and numerous pieces of
information
, the
internet
 will become the prepared tool for delivering
news
 and
information
 shortly.
Although
 there is a trust issue with the
information
 via the
internet
, it has gradually become well organized by governments around the world.
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