The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram portrays the stages of liquid chocolate processed from coca
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, there are nine steps with three main stages: collecting and harvesting in the traditional way, transporting, and processing with modern machines at the factory.
To begin
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with, cacao trees are cultivated in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. The trees have many branches with green leaves and two kinds of fruits. The unripe one is green, and the ripe one is red. After the fruit is ripe, it is ready to harvest. The farmer uses a sharp knife to open the fruit. The cacao
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are white with an oval shape.
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, the
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are fermented with banana leaves.
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to get the maximum result, the
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are spread in the sun and let dry before transporting the
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to the factory by truck or train. The
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are weighed and put into the sacks. The raw product is ready to send to the factory.
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the
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are roasted in a machine with high temperature, and it must be 350 celsius degrees. The roasted
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come to the next stage, with a rounded machine, the
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are separated from their shell, and the output is crushed
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. the
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step is to produce liquid chocolate. The machine pressed the
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with two mills to get the final product.
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