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Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A lot of people think that sharing more
information
 for scientific research, business and the academic
world
 is needed,
while
 many others worried
that is
 a bad idea to share freely some important
information
. Obviously, the
world
 needs
information
 to maintain and develop in the future, but it could
also
 take disadvantages when valuable
information
 are being shared without control. On the one hand, collecting more and more
information
 is the main method that humans used to create
this
 modern
world
. Learning from previous knowledge may provide many new methods that could help solve present and future problems.
For example
, recently scientists are using the collected
information
 from every individual, and
ancestors
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 to create new medicine for the virus Covid-19.
In addition
, the government can
also
 base on these kinds of
information
 to find methods that help grow the society in the country in a healthy way.
On the other hand
, not every piece of
information
 should be published without any cost. Explain
for
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that, these days there are some organizations or some individuals using people's
information
 for illegal purposes.
Along with
 the growth of the internet,
information
 could be stolen easily and cause many new problems. In conclusion, it is a good idea to share
information
 to help the
world
 grow significantly, but every piece of
information
 has its own cost and people should consider
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that when trading it with the outside
world
.
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