The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
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The supplied bat chart provides information about average data for temperature and rain amount during one year in Kolkata.
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, it can be seen that the precipitation figures are highest during the summer
while
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the hottest month is May. Getting back to details, from January to May there is a gradual increase in
rain
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figure starting just from over 25 to above 100,
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in June
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figure sees a significant rise to around 250 and reaches a peak in July with almost 350. In the
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two months of the
year
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it drops dramatically to its lowest proportion. In terms of temperature, the coolest weather is measured in January with roughly 20 degrees, after that we can observe an upward trend to the warmest month which is May and its temperature is approximately 30 degrees. During July, August and
September
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the graph remain relatively stable and
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fell to around 20 degrees in December.
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