The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show the expected changes in global production by sector in 2060 compared to 2040. Generally speaking, there is little change in the projected proportion of manufacturing by the various sectors in the two years, with manufacturing and services being the most dominant. It is forecast that the services and manufacturing sectors together will account for more than half of global fabrication in 2040 and 2060, 71% (40% and 31%) and 74% (41% and 33%) respectively.
By contrast
, the proportion of production from energy is expected to decline from 7% in 2040 to 5% in 2060, a drop of approximately one-third. It is
also
anticipated that there will be a similar dramatic drop in 2060 for agriculture production from 4% to 1% with manufacturing in materials,
by contrast
, comprising 4% in 2060 compared to 3% in 2040. As regards info-communications and technology, there is expected to be little difference in the proportion of manufacturing the sector constitutes, with a slight rise from 15% to 16% over the period.
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