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newspapers have a significant influence on people's ideas and opinions. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or a negative situation?

#newspapers #influence #people #situation
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In the recent time, the newspaper which is
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 of the most common
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 of
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. Many
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 discuss the positive and negative influence of
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. With providing
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 and official
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, I think the positive outweighs the negative.
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 said that
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 negatively affect
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 and there are several reasons for
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, many unethical
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 post news which has wrong facts and
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, a story has many aspects to look at, but bad
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 choose drama way to attract more readers.
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 see a story in the wrong way and sometimes affects
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 who are in the story.
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,
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 can manipulate readers.
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,
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 can be used as a tool for government to manipulate society.
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 do wrong things because their single source of truth
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 manipulated
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 have many positive aspects
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 as providing
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 and
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 to
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 misunderstanding
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 provide a lot of
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 update not only local news but
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 and open their
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 just by reading
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 help correct misunderstanding
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, there is a lot of wrong
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 have
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 to provide official
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 avoid misunderstanding
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 point of view. In conclusion,
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of
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people
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 both negative and positive. But personally,
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 society have correct ideas, I think the positive outweighs the negative.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reputation for credibility
  • set the agenda
  • in-depth investigative journalism
  • public awareness
  • public discourse
  • diverse opinions
  • shape societal norms and values
  • exclusive stories
  • expert opinions
  • guide public opinion
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