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The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
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The graph illustrates about median point comparison of heat degree and rain rate in the yearly period in Kolkata. In general, there are two parameters, temperature and precipitation, which are used in the chart and monthly data for the whole year. The precipitation rate starts at almost 10
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 value slightly rises until May with 100
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. After that, it increases significantly in the next month to 250
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 pick up about 325 and steadily in July and August.
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 number drops to about 300 in the next period and begins to decline rapidly in October and continues until December with a final rate of about 2
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. The temperature itself has slightly inclined since the first period. After steadily about 30 degrees,
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 down smoothly until October with about 28 degrees.
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, the value to
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 drop gradually in November and December with about 20 degrees
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 year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words mm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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