In some countries, it is believed that teenagers should be encouraged to do part-time jobs. Some people say it is a good practice. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In various nations, it is argued by the group of individuals that it is quite preferable to motivate juveniles towards doing part-

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employment.

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, the rest of the people oppose

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opinion.

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, it assists them to be a responsible person, at the same

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, children are pressurized under the burden. I equivocally believe that

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trend will prove beneficial for their future. To commence with, the first point is the burden on children's brains at an early age.

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their concentration on studies and target to compete with their peers, but with the prospectus of a

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, they get distracted from their studies and only depend upon a

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which is temporary.

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, they are not able to take massive loads which leads them to depression.

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, doctors revealed that teenagers' brain is quite sensitive and could only focus on a single thing at one

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gives them a sense of accomplishment and played a crucial role in their upcoming days. Another viewpoint is that teenagers can able to learn huge things at an early age by having

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experience.

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is because ,in the vacant hours after school, they have a huge

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which they often try to spend chatting with friends and in various ,cases these friends try to encourage them for bad things, but if their leisure

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would be spent performing work, it not only makes them intellectually strong

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make them a responsible child.

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it is enclosed that adolescents who were starting to do smoking, drinking and stealing can become more polite and sincere after involving in a part-

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job

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why, I believe the same.

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children can not able to do too much work at one

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still

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if they do so, will get a comfortable future. I firmly opine that there must be huge

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opportunities for toddlers' level that could help to show their skills.