Schools should take more responsibility for the health of today's children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statement.

Many people think that

schools

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should pay more attention to

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's

health

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nowadays. I strongly agree with

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statement because these days offspring have to spend most of their time at school,

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their parents very hard to keep an eye on, so looking after them will be a large responsibility for the

schools

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, today's

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have less time at home

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their parents have to go to work, so

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will be the main environment for

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's growth.

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can only gain knowledge and grow in a healthy way if they are in a good environment. Many reports showed that the proportion of suicide among

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is getting higher in some Japanese highschool when the bullying problems could not be controlled and

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have no attention to mental care.

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,

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is

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a part of education progress. When the school focus more on

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'

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, it will create chances for

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to learn how can they take care of their

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themselves.

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, in my university in Japan,

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will be able to know more about their bodies through the

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test every semester, and

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they will decide what they need to do to develop from that result. Many

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choose different sport course based on their fitness and ability. In conclusion,

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the development of the modern world, there are a lot of problems that may cause by

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why

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should take more responsibility for taking care of their

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and change the school services

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needed to protect those

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.