You recently bought some train tickets for a journey a week in advance. When you went to the station to catch the train, you were told you could not use the tickets and the staff were very unhelpful to you. Write a letter to the train company. In your letter -describe the problem you had with the tickets -say why you were unhappy with the staff -suggest what action the train company should take Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
#train #tickets #journey #week #advance #station #staff #company #-describe #-say #-suggest #action #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter in order to show my dissatisfaction regarding the service. I bought train
tickets
a week advance
and when I went to the station, I was told that I could not use them. The staff who attended Change preposition
in advance
me
was not helpful, simply telling me that it was Change preposition
to me
invarid
. He did not even give me the reason despite the fact that I kept asking for the reason. I am still not sure why I could not use the Correct your spelling
invalid
tickets
.
It would be great if you could support me regarding refund
the Wrong verb form
refunding
tickets
as I was not able to catch the train
. Additionally
, I would like to ask you to give me the reason for not being able to get on the train
with the tickets
that I bought in a week
advance. Change noun form
week's
Lastly
, it is advised to train
your staff regarding customer service. I am sure there are a lot of people need
assistance at the station, which is why more friendly and kind staff is needed at each station.
I look forward Correct pronoun usage
who need
hearing
from you.
Yours faithfully,
Hiromi OkumuraChange preposition
to hearing
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Explain the problem with more details, like the dates and specific circumstances, to strengthen your task achievement.
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The letter contains a polite and formal tone, which is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with appropriate greeting and closing.