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The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside report of Tempelton from 1990 to 2005.

The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside report of Tempelton from 1990 to 2005.
The given maps highlight information about the improvement of
Tempelton
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Tempelton's
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 coastline
among
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in
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two
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the two
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 mentioned years from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the zone became
more
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a more
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residental
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residential
 area at which point private houses took place to apartment blocks. If we look at
details
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the details
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, the northeast of the place
not
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has not
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 changed a lot with the exception of the railway which expanded to the coastline and new transport
vehicle
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vehicles
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 in the form of ferry presented services. Another striking point is that the green area on the southwest side
cut
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was cut
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 down and a new faculty
built
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was built
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 there. Obviously, two new apartments settled in the north of the area near the lake and
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, private houses in the south experienced the same alter with a huge supermarket nearby and private houses reconstructed between two bridges and the final item is an airport in the north side.

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