The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The given chart illustrates data about the amount of money which was spent weekly as families' wages in one territory in 1968 and in 2018 .
Overall
, it can be seen that Food was the head popular item among citizens in 1968 and the portions of other items were nowhere near as high as Food's ratio
while
the most favourable category in 2018 was leisure and
this
year's portions were Close to each other. What's more, Household goods were the only item that had the same quantity in both years. Looking at the details, over 35% of communities spent their incomes on feeding. Followingly, Housing and Clothes and footwear pieces were ranked second with one-tenth portion and they were followed by Leisure which had eight per
cent
. Personal goods and Transport had exactly the same pieces with seven per
cent
.
Finally
, Fuel and power had only six per
cent
. If we look at the portions related to the second year, Leisure was on the top with twenty-two per
cent
whereas
it was pursued by Housing with eighteen per
cent
.
Additionally
, Food was ranked third with 15%. What's more, Transport had 13%.
Subsequently
, Personal goods and Fuel and power both had the same amount which was under 5%.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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