The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The given chart illustrates data about the amount of money which was spent weekly as families' wages in one territory in 1968 and in 2018 .
Overall
, it can be seen that Food was the head popular item among citizens in 1968 and the portions of other items were nowhere near as high as Food's ratio Linking Words
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the most favourable category in 2018 was leisure and Linking Words
this
year's portions were Close to each other. What's more, Household goods were the only item that had the same quantity in both years.
Looking at the details, over 35% of communities spent their incomes on feeding. Followingly, Housing and Clothes and footwear pieces were ranked second with one-tenth portion and they were followed by Leisure which had eight per Linking Words
cent
. Personal goods and Transport had exactly the same pieces with seven per Use synonyms
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Finally
, Fuel and power had only six per Linking Words
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If we look at the portions related to the second year, Leisure was on the top with twenty-two per Use synonyms
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it was pursued by Housing with eighteen per Linking Words
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Additionally
, Food was ranked third with 15%. What's more, Transport had 13%. Linking Words
Subsequently
, Personal goods and Fuel and power both had the same amount which was under 5%.Linking Words
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