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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration while others think it is waste of money

#people #money #celebration #waste
Family
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 is a group
people
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 related by blood or by marriage
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celebration
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the celebration
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 is gathering
people
 when
good
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a good
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 thing has happened .
Family
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celebration
 is when you are gathering the whole family to celebrate something special . I Remy years back my aunt's wedding that took place in December it was a festival period which made all of us come down and brought the whole family together because I got to see my uncles and aunties I haven'
t
 seen in years time including my grandparents it was so much fun we laughed told jokes and it was a special kind of bond . Some
people
 didn'
t
 like it because of the
money
 involved each family was supposed to contribute a particular amount of
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money
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mone
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that
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 made it look like u re spending
money
 unnecessary Because at that time my parents weren'
t
 ok and
where
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 Angry about the
money
 issues because of our financial state
then
 so
this
 is why I
woul
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would
 say that
people
 don'
t
 like
family
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celebration
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 because of the
money
 aspects. Regardless I think
family
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a family
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celebration
 is a good idea because we got to see them before
the
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 travelled. Would love to have my own wedding like that I saw the loved and happiness it brought to us
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