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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration, while others think it is a waste of money, discuss both views

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Undoubtedly, it is a common opinion among the populace that it is of great need to spend lavishly on their family social
gatherings
,
while
in contrast
, some believe it is squandering. In my own opinion, it will help the family
members
 to socialize with each other thereby creating
family
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 bond,
however
,
this
 should
also
 be discouraged as not all family
members
 are financially
bouyant
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buoyant
 as
this
 might lead to decrease
self esteem
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 of some of the
members
. The forthcoming paragraphs will explain my points.
To begin
 with, spending time with family by celebrating social
gatherings
 in an extravagant way is a form of creating
bond
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 with each family
members
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member
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,
nonetheless
, it is a big deal to spend as much as possible on ensuring
such
 get together is worth attending,
for instance
, a party to appreciate a responsible mother during her birthday deserves to be lavishly done by the children.
On the other hand
,
financial
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 capacity of each family member should be considered, as they say, all fingers are not equal, frittering away of funds might have
negative
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 effect on the economy of some people as
this
 might lead to Dept which could be avoided,
such
 money is considered as a waste because it cannot be afforded. In conclusion, family
bond
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bonds
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 should not be overlooked as social
gatherings
 could enhance it,
however
, unnecessary pressure that might occur
due to
this kind
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these kinds
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 of
gatherings
 should be avoided.
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