Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration while others think it is a waste of money.discuss both views
Celebration
seems like a festival because of the way they are performed and a way of bringing people
together.majority believe that it is paramount to spend lavishly on a family celebration
while
others believe otherwise
.This
essay will discuss both views and my notion.
On the one hand,many think it is important to spend too much money
on family occasion
.Fix the agreement mistake
occasions
This
is because these days, people
rarely get time
to be with each other and it is through family ceremony they spend time
together.For instance
, an uncle of mine who live in other
country comes home Correct quantifier usage
another
every
family gathering to spend Change preposition
to every
time
with the family and he spend
a lot of Change the verb form
spends
money
whenever he is around.hence
there is need
to spend Correct article usage
a need
time
with the family
On the other hand
, others think spending a lot of money
in
a family Change preposition
on
celebration
is a waste of time
.This
is because of
some family occasion is just one day and Change preposition
apply
people
at times spend a lot of money
which can be for donations rather than spending it lavishly.Also
if too much money
is spend
like that Change the verb form
is spent
people
will not have any saving
for themselves Fix the agreement mistake
savings
at the end
of the family gathering.In addition
, their standard of living may decrease and will not be able to cope with the
modern society.
In conclusion,it is better to spend Correct article usage
apply
money
wise
regardless of whether there is a Change the word
wisely
celebration
or not,and it is always safe to plan ahead for any family celebration
in order to control the amount of money
spend
on any occasion.Wrong verb form
spent
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