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The diagram illustrates the number of people in Australia who born in four foreign countries, and percentages of immigrants in 1901, 1954 and 2016.

The diagram illustrates the number of people in Australia who born in four foreign countries, and percentages of immigrants in 1901, 1954 and 2016.
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The diagram illustrates the
number
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 of
people
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 in Australia who were born in four foreign
countries
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, and the percentages of
immigrants
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 in 1901, 1954 and 2016.
overall
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. it can be seen that
people
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 who come from the united kingdom were considerably higher
nonetheless
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, in recent years the percentage of UK
immigrants
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 noticeably decreases due o the rise in the
number
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 of
immigrants
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 who came from other
countries
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. In 1901,
People
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 who visited Australia from the United Kingdom ( England) were 495,504 evidently,
this
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 proportion was more than half of all settlers. In ,comparison
people
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 from another Western country (Germany) were significantly few (38,352). The
number
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 of
people
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 who came from China and New Zealand was similar ( nearly 30
thousand
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 and nearly 26
thousand
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 respectively). And, these
people
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 were 3.5 and 3 per
cent
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 of all
immigrants
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. in 1954,
immigrants
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 from Western
countries
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 increased to about 626
thousand
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 from England and 65
thousand
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 from Germany, nearly 48% and 5,1% of all
immigrants
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.
Whereas
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,
people
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 who came from Southern
countries
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 (China) witnessed a dramatical decrease of approximately 20
thousand
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 ,
however
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 who came from New Zealand rose to more than 40
thousand
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 and it was 3.4 per
cent
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 of general
immigrants
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. In 2016, the
number
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 of
immigrants
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 (UK) witnessed an increase of over a million
nevertheless
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, the
overall
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 percentage decreased to 17.7 per
cent
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due to
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 the increasing
number
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 of
immigrants
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 from other foreign
countries
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.
People
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 of Germany ( about 100
thousand
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), the
number
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people
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 of both Southern
countries
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 were roughly equal (china) about 500
thousand
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 and (New Zealand) 518
thousand
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. Clearly, These were 8.3 and 8.4 per
cent
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 of general
immigrants
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 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, countries, immigrants, thousand, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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