The diagram illustrates the number of people in Australia who born in four foreign countries, and percentages of immigrants in 1901, 1954 and 2016.
The diagram illustrates the
number
of people
in Australia who were born in four foreign countries
, and the percentages of immigrants
in 1901, 1954 and 2016.
overall
. it can be seen that people
who come from the united kingdom were considerably higher nonetheless
, in recent years the percentage of UK immigrants
noticeably decreases due o the rise in the number
of immigrants
who came from other countries
.
In 1901, People
who visited Australia from the United Kingdom ( England) were 495,504 evidently, this
proportion was more than half of all settlers. In ,comparison people
from another Western country (Germany) were significantly few (38,352). The number
of people
who came from China and New Zealand was similar ( nearly 30 thousand
and nearly 26 thousand
respectively). And, these people
were 3.5 and 3 per cent
of all immigrants
.
in 1954, immigrants
from Western countries
increased to about 626 thousand
from England and 65 thousand
from Germany, nearly 48% and 5,1% of all immigrants
. Whereas
, people
who came from Southern countries
(China) witnessed a dramatical decrease of approximately 20 thousand
,however
, the number
of people
who came from New Zealand rose to more than 40 thousand
and it was 3.4 per cent
of general immigrants
.
In 2016, the number
of immigrants
(UK) witnessed an increase of over a million nevertheless
, the overall
percentage decreased to 17.7 per cent
due to
the increasing number
of immigrants
from other foreign countries
. People
of Germany ( about 100 thousand
), the number
people
of both Southern countries
were roughly equal (china) about 500 thousand
and (New Zealand) 518 thousand
. Clearly, These were 8.3 and 8.4 per cent
of general immigrants
respectively.Submitted by bexzodraxmatillayev2 on
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