Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, many

people

prefer to be self-employed, rather than to be an employer. It has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. Some

people

think its advantages outweigh the

disadvantages

,

while

others do not think so. In my eyes, there are more

disadvantages

.

Firstly

, it has been argued why I think the

disadvantages

of being self-employed outweigh the advantages. Admittedly, there are many positive aspects of being a

boss

.

For example

, one well-known businessman, Blair White once said"Once you are a

boss

, you can totally feel the real sense of freedom"

In addition

, you have more chances than others to be a rich person.

Moreover

, you can build your successful career. It is

thus

clearly shown why many

people

choose to be self-employed.

However

, there are many negative sides

of

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being a

boss

. As far as society is concerned, the ultimate aim of society is to make

people

happy.

For instance

, one recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that being a

boss

means you have more pressure on yourself because of more responsibilities.

Besides

, it is quite risky to be broke in

the

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bad economic situation. Worse

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, you will surely be a busy person and can not get enough time to spend with your family or friends. There is no doubt that being a

boss

brings you more stress, rather than happiness.

To sum up

, I hold the view that being a

boss

has more

disadvantages

. In order to address

this

issue, the government and

people

should make a concerted effort to find a solution.