The chart below shows Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing high school degree course with their salary grade after 5years.
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the table depicts various monthly payments for different kinds of jobs. Units measured in percentages.
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daily staff and part-time employees were shown as the least.Linking Words
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the governmental salary earners , they were paid highly compared with other workers. Linking Words
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, the personal company was revealed to be the minority .
To start with , anthropologists mounted over half of graduate workers and 5% of fresh bachelor's degree holders were one in twenty . Linking Words
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, non-workers alumni were noticed to be below a quarter of the sector. Linking Words
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graduates
of Anthropology accounted for 8% exhibiting similar trends.
Next , from the tabular illustration, authority sectoral bodies were placed high in the period of five years of experience as half of the population .Comparingly , free-lance consultants and government earners were categorized evenly with $25,000- 49,999 and $50,000-74,999 as 5% and 15% for each group . Use synonyms
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,it differs by two-fifths for freelance candidates though less than a third of government salaried workers,both had $ 75,000 -99,999 . Linking Words
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, private establishments were recorded as the lowest proportion with less than two-thirds of$100,00+ .Linking Words
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