A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to – - Congratulate your friend. - Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. - Suggest arrangements for the visit.

Dear Bella, I'm delighted to hear that you gave birth to a healthy and puffy baby boy. I wish you and the newborn a happy and long life. I can't wait to see and hold him in my arms. I've made plans to visit your new family

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the upcoming weekend. I bought a cradle for your child and I wanted to let you know in advance so that there's no need to buy another one. I know that you and Fred have to feed one additional mouth now and guessed that expenses might be going through the roof these days.

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gift, hoping to help you avoid spending a hefty amount of money. As I mentioned earlier, I hope to see you soon and my thought is to pop by the Hospital on

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Saturday. If you want I can come to your house as well,

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please beware that I'm coming with my friend Geroge who is a doctor to check up on your baby to make sure he is doing fine as a fire. I am eagerly waiting for a reply. Best Wishes, Devin

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May 6, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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190 words

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Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local business are unable to compete. some thought that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree??

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