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I am writing
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letter about an Apple hardware failure. A few days ago, your
company
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delivered an office
laptop
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to me. At
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this
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laptop
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worked fine without any incidents. After some
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, I found out that
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laptop
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was faulty, as it began to fail, quickly discharged, the keyboard buttons were poorly pressed and the touch mouse
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did not work from
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to
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.
As a result
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of these problems, my productivity,
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decreased, more
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was spent on work, and I had to work more with papers. You stated that you provide a four-year warranty on
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laptop
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. Because of these problems, I decided to contact your
company
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, hoping that you will pay attention to
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and take action. And I would like you to take into account all these shortcomings, exchange me for another new
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or return the money. In case of refusal to exchange or refund money, I will sue your
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. I think you don't want
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because you don't want to ruin your
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's reputation. Sincerely, your humble Apple hardware buyer.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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