Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others believe we have become more independent. discuss both views and give your opinion
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on each other will decrease. I agree with the second opinion. In the following paragraphs, I will express my opinion Use synonyms
while
stating the reasons.
On the one hand, it can be said that with the modernization of the world, Linking Words
people
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dependence
is created. With the advancement of technology and the creation of more modern communication tools, as we can see, Use synonyms
people
can easily communicate with each other. Take Use synonyms
today
's mobile phones as an example. A person in a foreign country can easily communicate with someone in a fraction of a second; on the other side of the borders, it is easy to communicate with the Internet connection, and Use synonyms
as a
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result
, many long-distance relationships are created in which there is Use synonyms
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concept.
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On the other hand
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people
are more independent than before. Use synonyms
Today
, with life conditions becoming more complicated, many Use synonyms
people
spend many hours of their time working, studying, or studying, and Use synonyms
as a
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result
, they are less able to spend time with their friends or family. Use synonyms
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, they can devote less time to being together, and Use synonyms
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, they become less dependent on each other. Use synonyms
In addition
, nowadays the concept of independence is very important and many psychologists emphasize independence especially for women and Linking Words
people
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this
aspect of their personality than before. They become completely independent, they especially tend to be financially independent. In fact, in the past, we saw many Linking Words
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Younger ages are trying to be independent and I believe Change preposition
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this
trend will continue and we will see more independent Linking Words
people
every day.
In general, I believe that Use synonyms
although
modernization with the increase in the level of technology can in some ways make Linking Words
people
more dependent than before, Use synonyms
but
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due to
reasons Linking Words
such
as the complexity of life and the popularization of the concept of independence from a young age, Linking Words
today
we see an increase in independent Use synonyms
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