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Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages

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These days students and non-students write their letters and essays in a less formal manner.
firstly
,they believe
this
 approach makes life easier. As we know, the academic
way
 of writing is always locked up with grammatical and punctuation roles. From
this
 regard, we try to remove the difficulties.
Secondly
, a formal
way
 requires prolonged time even for small essays.,
Nonetheless
 the nonacademic methods of writing are not well welcomed by the public. Many readers look for perfection in each sentence of what they have explored. There is some belief that the exceptional essay must be formal and it will reflect the personality of the writer. ,
Also
 an academic essay
that is
 well organised and written with a good plot will affect the path of your life . I remember one of my friends ,
for instance
, send a scholarship statement to two universities,one with a formal and one with an informal
way
 of writing,he gain a scholarship from the university that he sent them the formal letter. In my opinion, we should write our letters in a formal
way
,
this
 will demonstrate to the readers how we respect and love what our pen goes with.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • informality
  • digital communication
  • texting
  • social media
  • instant messaging
  • generational shifts
  • brevity
  • personal expression
  • language standards
  • erosion
  • interlocutors
  • emojis
  • internet slang
  • academic contexts
  • language learning
  • misunderstandings
  • language teaching
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